This was my magazine whilst it was still under construction.
As we were still making our magazine's our teacher stopped us and asked us to peer assess 3 different peoples magazines. This was a way of helping us to find out where we were at that moment and also to give us ideas and guidance into making our magazines better. As we did this we gave both good and bad criticism. I found this very helpful as i was able to see what i was doing wrong and whether there was anything i could change to make it look better.
As we were still making our magazine's our teacher stopped us and asked us to peer assess 3 different peoples magazines. This was a way of helping us to find out where we were at that moment and also to give us ideas and guidance into making our magazines better. As we did this we gave both good and bad criticism. I found this very helpful as i was able to see what i was doing wrong and whether there was anything i could change to make it look better.
"The colour match with the cap is good"
"No barcode and large space in top right hand corner"
"Top 20 RNB - is unclear as to what it is (chart, videos, songs)
"The circle with poster may look better in blue or green"
"Picture is not cut out well"
"Green and blue text goes well with the colour gradient"
"Too much space to the top right"
"Font is repetitive, add in different ones"
"Need to look at how the picture is cut out"
"take the "-" out of the title"
"Work on alignment of text"
"Colour scheme works but the top cover lines do not match the others in colour"
"I like the little fonts it works well for the magazine"
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