Double Page Spread - Peer Assessment

I though it would be a good idea to get some constructive criticism from a few friends so i asked them to give me two things that were good and two things that could be improved on my double page spread.

Anthony:

• A very good image with model dressed well and in a unique environment
• The use of the link to listen to the srtists music online is a good way to attract your audience
• Try and fill up space at the top of the page
• Should find a way to add more text as double pages spread should be a bit more informative.

Ola:

• Layout of the double page spread is different from ordinary doublepage spreads
• The way the title/subject of the dps is ver intersting and well thought of
• Should use more than two colours when it came to the text to add more interest
• Should have place the logo somewhere else on the page and not just at the bottome of the page

Eugene:

• Very good use of colour on the page
• Model fits the dps very well and is dressed appropriate
• A white background is a bit boring
• Should add more text or make a second dps